There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Over the past years, the incidences of serious crimes have grown so noticeable that they now call for immediate action. A small group of people argue that capital punishment is the right way to deal with this phenomenon whereas others think that we should consider some other alternatives. I personally believe that offenders have a right to live however bad their crime is.
On the one hand, some might argue that serious criminals should be sentenced to death to make an example for other would-be offenders. This is because some people with tendencies to commit a crime may not fully realize the consequences of their criminal actions unless they see others suffer a severe penalty. It is true that in countries such as China and Japan, where the death penalty is practiced for felons convicted of serious crimes, there is a lower rate of capital crimes like homicide, child kidnapping, drug smuggling, and human trafficking. For these reasons, one might be in favor of the idea of implementing an extreme measure such as this.
However, I would like to think that everyone deserves a chance to a fair trial to make their case, be heard, and seek redemption. We have heard stories of people who become complicit in bad crimes because they were knocked into a different life than they intended. Therefore, rather than make them pay for their wrongdoings with their lives, we should give them a chance to understand their faults and help them rectify them through community work or by working with the victims of their crimes. Alternatively, offenders of crimes of this nature can be sent to more rigorously monitored penitentiaries where they face greater restrictions than average criminals do.
In conclusion, despite the argument put forward in favor of applying the death penalty in serious criminal cases, I am personally against it as I believe that a criminal offender of any kind deserves another chance to make amends and be again an accepted member of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99395770393 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66975144305 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567975830816 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1854567976 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210987637593 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826616912994 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482419620198 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132138147024 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523605569378 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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