In contemporary epoch, it is argued by some people that whether people have been going to oversease for working together with family or not. I woild discuss not merely merits but also demerits of it in the forthcoming paragraphs with the conclusion at last.
To embark, on the bright side, children would live away from fatal hazardious drugs. For instance, noadays, in foreign countries such as Canada, America and London the name but a few, people have been celebrating birthday party in hotel along with alcohol; individuals have been becoming a carouse. If folks will live with their kin, person would live away from perilous drugs, since human beings have some fear of their parents. Due to that, drinking alcohols will be avoided. Consequently, people may save their crucial life. It is beneficial for not only one but also nuclear family. Moreover, humankind will know regarding culture besides traditional in host nations. To illustrate, in modern era, manifold festivals have been celebrating in distinct counties like halloween which is not celebrated in india. If individuals will go at host counties with their kin ménage, people can know concerning this festivels that is celebrated in foreigns besides importance of it. Thus, it is fruitful for mankind for living tremendous life style without any culture barrier.
However, on the dark side, people have some burdon of money; for example, in cutthroat compitition era, educated folks might be obtained marvellous job inspite of having essential cognizance touching their filds due to language barrier. People could not communicat with native people. As a resulted, it is very adversity to take spectacular jobs in order to earn money. Once cannot fullfil the redimentorary needs of family as well as themselves. Hence, family might be survived in foreign nations. Family may be flawed their life.
To recapitulate, I personally aver that although people will go for a work at overseas, person should go with their family instead of solely. However, advantages of it are outweigh disadvantages of it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74071063308 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596385542169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2822530293 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.15 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216383980534 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677544343641 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589794603882 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151429376625 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034148720282 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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