today more people are overweight than ever before
what in your opinion are the primary causes of this ?
what measures can be taken to overcome this epidermic ?
Nowadays, all over the world, the number of people who are overweight increases unstoppably, especially in developed countries. There are many factors affecting that thing. this essay focuses on listing some important causes and give main solutions to deal with this health problem.
There are many reasons to explain why the number of overweight people grows up. First of all, the economic development makes citizens spend too much time for working, in which their specialty requires stay indoor working with laptops, tablets...Futherrmore, they break down their healthy diet and choose high fat foods for breastfast and lunches which is the first line of risk factors of overweight and obesity.secondly, transportation is now developing rapidly and citizens choose public transportation like bus, metro...or drive car by their own to move. Doing exercise less make them unable to burn out their energy in their body. On the other hand, some person is not under pressure of working, but because of lazziness, utility of mobile phones too much push them far away a healthy lifestyle.
the trend of socioeconomic development makes people stressful but many people find ways to keep their fitness and avoid overweight. they balance their lifestyle by arranging time to do exercise regularly and working effectively.
beside it, they keep a balance diet which have the proper amount of fruit, vegetables and meat in each meal. In some countries, governments encourage people to go to workplace by bicycle or foot. health care system also play an important role in giving knowledge to citizens ways to prevent overweight for each person and their family.
in conclusion, obesity is now becoming a big problem globally. many reasons are responsible for that healthy problem. but health care system in each country and individuals need to have knowledge to overcome that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3164983165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91429264333 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.039636589 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 105.266666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903423242474 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325049103813 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430177494321 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588462017259 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472527148103 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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