As well as making money, businesses have to social responsibilities. to what extend do you agree or disagree?
Not only do the companies make profit in the countries but also there are some social responsibilities to take which play an important role in economical section of the society. So, I completely agree that factories have to make a contribution to social activities.
On the one hand, making fortune would be a significant goal of any companies that managers and sinier staff make an effort to reach. In addition, running a company comes at a huge of cost to owner. As a result, there are predictable running cost to pay, such as month salary, bills and taxes. Therefore, the profit a company could are able to cover these expensive during an every financial year ,and owner of properties need to earn sufficient income in order to invest unless they want be a successful compared to other competitors. Paying taxes also is one of the cost company face every year which there is no way to evade. A factory will go bankrupt definitely providing losing money and they do not tackle the other problems.
On the other hand, it is true that setting up a business lead to improve job position and reduce the employee rate. I argue that cooperating in some social activities is one of duties a company has. Because a majority of companies utilize resource of country, they have to take some burden of the government. There are some way to do duties companies can consider. Take charity for example. Factories must give donation to reduce the result of activities which lead to global warming and weather pollution. Actually, it would be a Solution to compensate their damages.
In conclusion, although the companies have an critical role in making money, they have to assist to support some projects as their responsibility to lift out poverty and contribute to give people a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84967320261 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75882809729 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2545247016 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15176178023 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500164084184 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612652452148 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113103890486 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626017708068 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.