while recruiting a new employee,the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities rather than qualifications and experience .To what extent do you agree or disagree .give your opinion with relevant example.
The main motive of every working sector is grow more and more. Presently, it is necessary that the boss of any department must pay attention on employees personal qualities instead of their knowledge and experience during the time of selection. Here, I would like to discord with the given statement.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, experience employee have abundance of knowledge he she can easily tackle the problem with spirit on the other side,those employees who get job due to personal qualities may be perfect in one particular area but their knowledge are limited they can not depict their qualities every time like as experience employee. As a result , a employee with full knowledge is fruitful for working sectors. Moreover, sometimes while recruiting employees some employees are good looking but it does not mean that their work is also good for department . Therefore, the director must think about the employees knowledge and way of working rather than their appearance.
Numerous points can be mentioned .it is well said that all glitter is not gold. To illustrate, with lot of practice some employees shows more than their knowledge during the time of interview on the basis of their talent management easily hier them which is not beneficial in further future of a department .Thus, management should pay more attention on employees experience and knowledge.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, appearance and qualities matter in this competitive world. However, still I believe that without knowledge and experience employee a department is like a bird without wings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27692307692 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81521087523 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.5809826814 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189453288457 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652734403647 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534460511337 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120881110689 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473827169389 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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