Working and studying while in college
Working and studying while in college can be rewarding and tiring at the same time. The number of college students who work and study during college has dramatically increased over the years that have to become advantage and disadvantage with the individual.
First, Most of the reason’s student of working while studying is to earn money for them. They have to pay their life accommodation, their food, their book as well as buy something what they want. They want to improve their life and parent by working early. In addition to, if they have experience working during their study that make their resume look better. The employers alway figure out the indicate have many skills practice instead of just have theory from the books. For instance, my class, having 70% of the number of students work in the university.
Second, the student must know how to manage their time, the balance between working and studying, If not they may have trouble getting enough sleep as it is not enough time to do homework after a working day. Beside, the number of student postpone the learning to focus their work is remarkable.
Finally, in my opinion, working and learning at the same time is excellent but the student have to know their ability and power. If they overload, it can bring them to a bad result
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... better. The employers alway figure out the indicate have many skills practice instead of ju...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng enough sleep as it is not enough time to do homework after a working day. Besi...
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Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly, in my opinion, working and learning at the same time is excellent but the st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39677149104 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.414907194 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323599772024 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14102143033 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141702196291 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220554914879 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177725964022 0.056905535591 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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