Since the early 1700s when vaccines were discovered, the ability of vaccines to prevent infectious diseases has been proven to be highly effective. Nevertheless, some people still choose not to immunize their children for some reasons due to the lack of the obligation for vaccination. Therefore, for the sake of the improved healthcare for people, I believe such obligation should be implemented.
In the 1980s, there was a concern pertaining to the ability of vaccines to induce autism in babies. A decade later, a medical journal proofing such concern was released which shook the world. Even though that journal was found out to be fraudulent later, many people still believe that detrimental effect of vaccines. As a result, years later, for the first time in 30 years, a case of measles appeared in Spain in an infant because his parents did not want to vaccinate him due to autism concerns. Therefore, the lack of medical knowledge in societies can be harmful for their children, especially when they choose not to immunize their children and put them to the fatal risk of infectious diseases.
Before 20th century, there were no concerns of the adverse effects of vaccines, however, many people still did not know vaccines or their benefits. Even more, those people still exist in some countries, making those countries have difficulties in tackling infectious diseases which can be prevented with immunizations. By making it obligatory for parents vaccinating their children, more children can have infectious diseases prevented. Moreover, there will be no more need for health professionals wasting time to convince uneducated people to vaccinate their children. Hence, the law obligates parents to vaccinate their children will prevent infectious diseases more efficiently in children.
In summary, the world need a law to obligate vaccination in children to prevent infectious diseases in children more efficiently and to prevent people not to vaccinate their children because of their biased knowledge.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37421383648 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8474473776 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493710691824 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1409513896 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133547259611 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561875960881 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335800938525 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866773625009 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282829108609 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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