A young people should take advice from an old people not from a young one. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that old is gold as they have much wiser and more experience than youngsters, so young people should get advice from their seniors. Consummately, I agree with the given statement as olders give useful advice to youngsters and not their peers.
The first and the foremost reason is that teenagers are unable to make the right decisions as they do not have much experience. Therefore, they take advice from their parents or elders, who have their life experience and know what is right or wrong for their children. For example, if a student needs a piece of advice about a course which he should pursue after school, then he can take guidance from his school teachers as they are know about the weakness or abilities of the student and guide those courses that are fruitful for his or her career.
Moreover, if someone wants to start his own business, then he gets advice from elders before starting business as he knows that seniors have their life experience in which they face lots of difficulties or failures. Thus, people think that older people guide better than young people, and learn the mistakes of seniors and never repeat those mistakes in their life.
In conclusion, I believe that the best and most trustworthy advice can only come from teachers or parents due to their experience or knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79385964912 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40675203768 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55701754386 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.744667977 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.625 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243143721726 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108908472094 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760500464506 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155468860728 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675576687633 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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