Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Essay topics:

Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Todays world economy tries to find more convenient and cheaper ways to transport different goods, therefore air transport is favored. Solution for the countries which climate and seasons do not support their growth, is import. Exporting fruits and vegetables has both negative and positive sides, such as short shelf life or good marketing opportunities.

Countries wich have poor climate for growing exotic fruits and vegetables have high demand among consumers. High demand builds perfect marketing foundation and constant consumption amount. Cheapest and fastest way to support the need is by air transport. Thanks to air transport we can enjoy those exotic goods around the world, despite seasons and climate. For example, Estonian climate do not support growth of kiwis. As kiwis have short shelf life only way to export them form New Zealand to Estonia is by air transport.

Nevertheless, short shelf life has own challenges. Exporting fast decay acting goods in constant and massive amounts needs constant quality check. Transport time is the most import aspect to delivering healthy fruits and vegetables to consumers. Although, it is fast and convenient, it can be less liable and amounts are much smaller compared to the land or sea transport. amounts what are possible transport by sea, are much bigger and cost many times less than air transport. Also, air transport can be delayed, because planes can have minor problem, therefore maintenance is carried out immediately. For that reason, goods will go bad and consumers do not have their products.

To conclude advantages and disadvantages of air transport, we can clearly see that despite fast delivery, it has its own difficulties. As the planes are really complicated machines they need constant checks and maintenance wich is expensive and time consuming. Under those circumstances there will be storage of goods in stores.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...climate do not support growth of kiwis. As kiwis have short shelf life only way to...
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... compared to the land or sea transport. amounts what are possible transport by sea, are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3745819398 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74711655492 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4252475562 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5789473684 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248715316841 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708951834913 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467663349713 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154303012145 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147861746545 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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