Art Is Considered An Important Part Of The Society As Well As An Expression Of Its Culture
Both ancient and modern time, art has played a crucial role in reflecting its society. Various form of art not only helps people who struggle from any kinds of problem to overcome but also inspire them to take part in an enormous social movement. In modern school, art is one of the momentous subjects of the school curriculum providing chances to express their feeling themselves. However, concentrate more on art rather than other academic studies cannot be an ideal way.
It is true that art takes a significant role among children. To begin with, It releases tension and stress towards academic study. A number of children are suffering and under a lot of pressure by academic studying. Hence, art supports to express their feeling so that they can even get better on academic performance. In addition, children likely to strengthen creativity by making something their own hand. For example, crafting or drawing gives children numerous opportunity to thinking creatively. Furthermore, it urges them to make a decision by themselves in the course of art. In other words, evolving their decision-making. Not only will this spark imagination, but children also use creative thinking to react and solve the problem when necessary.
However, maintaining a balance between art and academic studies is more vital. Some professional jobs need strong academic knowledge such as doctor or accounts. Similarly for jobs like a pastry chef or plumbing needs particular skills with years of practicing. Thus, children should obtain knowledge and skills both eras.
To sum up, It is very important to keep a balance between art and academic study in a way for their career as well as creativity. However, Focusing only more on art is not a wise idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...c knowledge such as doctor or accounts. Similarly for jobs like a pastry chef or plumbing...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, similarly, so, then, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0979020979 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78752697143 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4186158799 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.7368421053 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26315789474 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174680819583 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447659854926 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484832338166 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106085904878 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788883115038 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.