In this precious life, it is prominent thing to battle with plenty of barriers to retain their existence without any differentiate between rich and poor people. However, low class people always attain their target at significant level than high class people, and the reasons are summarized below.
According to the impoverished people, they are brought up from the low level category that means they would have not got the basic things like house, vehicle, proper education, even the appropriate food. This terrible circumstance makes them a strong person in terms of encountering problems to their impending life, because they have well accustomed to counter such suffers from their childhood onwards by this society and people and those are bestowed the magnificent lesson to penury people like how to live in this rapid world and where to be resilience and so on. For instance, the famous current prime minister of India Mr. Modi who born and brought up with poor environment after facing all impediments now he is being a successful person by the lesson he learned from the bottom level.
Though, it is irrefutable factor that prosperous people are also contributing important role in this society, but depend upon number of victorious people is getting worse. Owing to the fostering method from their parents they could not shine in this fast pace world, opulent parents do everything in behalf of their infants which makes them weaker in terms of coping and encountering the problems. This lead to backlash in adult stage where they should need to fight for their place.
To sum up this, it seems to me that the person who need success or sustain in this society, they should have known about the difficulties to tackling in this sophisticated world from their childhood onwards, which is the absence of affluent people and the catalyst of indigent people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06472491909 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56304550285 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0056977976 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.888888889 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3333333333 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150291480271 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620238545615 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030871519722 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897381945963 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323963776933 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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