Cities are becoming overcrowded.What are the causes of this situation, and what can be done to improve this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.

Essay topics: Cities are becoming overcrowded.
What are the causes of this situation, and what can be done to improve this situation?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.

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Leading a better life style is a dream of every individual in both city and countrt side. The realization of limited opportunities in the rural area is pushing majority of the youth to urban locations. However, this urbanization is creating a major problem of overpopulation in the cities. This essay will further discuss the issues caused due to overcrowding and the probable solutions to combat them.

Firstly, undoubtedly the growth in hight income opportunities in IT, banking, healthcare and many other sectors in mega cities is one of the major reason for which people prefer to leave their hometown. The second reason is for education. The enormous number of people moving to larger towns is causing a major concern for accommodation. More and more people demanding places to stay is indirectly luring apartment owners to charge humungous rent from tenants. For instance, around 4to 5 years back the rent for an unfurnished house in a well maintained society in a city like Pune was around 6-7k, which has gone up to 13-14k today.

The government and the larger private companies should work together and introduce opportunities at the rural level itself which in first place will help limit the migration of people and diminish the further loop of problem developed.

Another issue arising out of overcrowding is transportation. As the clan grows the number of options available for commuting start falling short. The biggest example of this is Mumbai city. Although, there are numerous ways of transportation available like busses, taxis, local trains one would observe these are always full at the peak hours. People are crumbled in the local trains so much that there is no space to breathe.

The only resort to solve this problem is to introduce more options for people to move from one place to other. The local bodies can work on new modes of transportation like air busses or underground metros.

Overpopulation is becoming a concern all over the world. The government and multinationals should come up with an integrated plan to curb the problem at the root itself.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, well, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07826086957 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84113570424 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3723531436 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2105263158 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10526315789 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130513001517 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412617346711 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340016870356 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605492166503 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265624428153 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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