Many people believe that having tertiary education is essential for young people getting jobs, while others argue that experience and skills are more significance to compete for works than those degrees. In my opinion, I would agree with both arguments.
One the one hand, university education has become a key step for a person to prepare for his or her future career. Firstly, there are jobs that definitely require a person to be trained properly through universities such as teaching, medicine and law. This is because people, who work in these positions, need to be equipped with the best knowledge and technique from experienced teachers, which help students avoiding mistakes when it comes to real works. Secondly, university education has become a conditional requirement for many jobs. By this, in order to be recruited, one must have at least a higher education degree or even post qualifications. The increasing number of university students show just how significant it is for having tertiary education.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that having relevant experience and skills also contribute to the success of job hunting. One aspect is that most of laboring work such as farming, housekeeping and trading do not require employees having academic backgrounds. These positions need someone who is experienced and skillful to be able to work immediately without any further trainings. Another aspect is that while owning the university degree is necessary to be qualified for a job, sometimes, experience and skills are deciding factors for a person to be considered as more advantageous than others who do not have these. This explains the reason why many employers list additional skills and relevant experience as preferences in their job advertisements.
In conclusion, I believe that, in this competitive job market, people will need both higher education and experience or skills to find their promising careers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, at least, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31818181818 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95638589745 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2047080434 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245884572202 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852213017919 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593232744637 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161390409141 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427411466457 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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