Due to man's interference in nature issues like pollution and climate change are on the rise. Despite taking measures at a global level the governments have not been able to achieve much. Why is this the case and how can this problem be solved?
Increasing trend of the world population has raised many social-economic issues such as global warming and pollution. Despite collaborative efforts of governments across the globe to contain this issue, great results are not visible. This essay will discuss the factors responsible and some possible solutions before drawing a suitable conclusion.
There are multifarious reasons for this phenomenon, firstly, industrialisation in developing countries like India, China, Brasil is adversely affecting the environment and highly contributes to pollution in the air, water and soil. International summits have unable to address this issue because industrialisation generates a high number of jobs in these densely populated countries. Moreover, with this growing number of mass, there is more requirement of urbanisation and this results in deforestation that further aggravates the issue. On the more, governments fail to implement robust policies and laws to restrain pollution and increasing population.
'Every lock has a key', similarly, this issue can be weed out by taking stringent steps. Primarily, governments should make some strict laws for industries causing a heavy amount of pollution in the air, contamination of water by industrial waste should be barred strictly. Then, the public should be made aware of the importance of protecting the environment. Further, people should be encouraged to plant more trees and use products that could be recycled easily. Besides this, in order to kerb pollution, public transport system should be made very effective and people should be encouraged to use it instead of their private cars.
Though these problems have gained an acute magnitude, however, it can be surmounted if collective initiatives are taken by the authorities and the individuals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... developing countries like India, China, Brasil is adversely affecting the enviro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17219789833 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5299217395 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227294968624 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770692366726 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035344962237 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123485875584 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207215833011 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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