Due to television and the internet it is easier today for a large number of people to become famous. Is it a positive or a negative development?
Is it easier to become a celebrity in the contemporary era due to media? Apparently, more often than not it is observed by many a man that the social media influencers have taken a rise in the past few years, owing to the worldwide usage of the internet as well as television. To my mind it is a welcome change because a myriad of masses have found their passion in life and have started earning at an early age, making them self-dependent.
Arguably, technology is not considered to have changed our way to communicate and socialize for no reason. With the emergence of social media platforms, people around the world are not only able to show their art and talent but also, they have been able to convert it into a business by doing advertisements for the companies. A painstaking research has had been undertaken by Facebook, a leading social media brand, which revealed that 19% of the world population was able to land a job in the media such as news channels, reality shows as soon as they got recognized on the social media platform which made them popular worldwide.
Notwithstanding the brighter side, the trend certainly has its drawbacks, given the current state of the internet, fake information is getting viral creating fear in the mind of the citizens and encouraging violence. Moreover, teenagers have fallen prey to the bad influence of the graphic contents over the media leading to an increase in the rate of delinquency between them. Although it is not entirely untrue, the real impact is not that severe as has been assumed. For example, no sooner did a survey conducted by the Harvard University on the leading social media application Whatsapp, than it was revealed that 58% of fake facts and figures were spread around the world, which in turn created a turmoil among the citizens.
To conclude, but for any doubts, the internet has created sensational outcomes by providing a platform for the underrated parts of the world. Therefore, if the trend continues it would lead to a socially stable and professionally enriching lives; lest good outcomes should be far out of reach.
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| 2020-05-30 | HARANMOL SINGH | 92 | view |
| 2020-05-29 | HARANMOL SINGH | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'painstaking research'.
Suggestion: Painstaking research
...doing advertisements for the companies. A painstaking research has had been undertaken by Facebook, a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80937034376 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580555555556 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3749869219 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854203325762 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397374159796 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536440006004 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547025718863 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202572170045 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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