Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Essay topics:

Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are a few things that are considered as a basic human right and free healthcare is a prime example of it. Many countries provide to its citizens a free of cost basic treatment making it a necessity while the others even provide full coverage including the latest medical treatments. I firmly believe that the Government of every country should at least provide primitive medical treatment at gratis.

The social security systems of some countries are so mechanized that the residents not only get modern medical attention but also, they do not have to pay for it. These countries have set a criterion for granting these benefits such as the payment of taxes for a certain period. Nevertheless, most of the countries cannot afford to provide complete medical service without any cost because of the sheer size of the population.

The primary remedial service should be provided by every country as every citizen contributes to the economy in the form of taxes or by the other means. Without having free basic healthcare, the functionality of the government cannot exist. However, it can opt to charge for the disease which requires modern and costly solutions. For example, if there is a spread of an epidemic in a city and it is a paramount duty of the government to eradicate it without any charges. Otherwise, there are risks of spreading the disease to the nearby localities and henceforth a spike in the costs. On the other hand, if a citizen is suffered from a disease which is not common or the treatment of which requires heft sums, it should be borne collectively by the patient and the government.

In a nutshell, the running of basic healthcare facilities should be part and parcel of every country and these are essential in case of an emergency or any force majeure situation.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of spreading'.
Suggestion: of spreading
...any charges. Otherwise, there are risks of spreading of spreading the disease to the nearby localities an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, at least, for example, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89423076923 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74907902515 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509615384615 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4121023492 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183246734418 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647064735949 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470518744826 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111193363314 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250767659975 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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