It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be.
Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought close together.
Include examples from your own experience.
Traditionally, people have always lived in joint families. Then came an era when families started to divide and became more nuclear families including husband, wife and kids but still living close by and in the same town.Today we see this equation even further diving the families when some family members move out to different town or even different country. If it is about kids going out for college or husband got a new job in the city, every family now experiencing that they are not as close as they used to.
There are many reasons people make decisions to move away from home. One most popular reason is for study. In order to get higher education in reputed colleges, which not always is present in your hometown, student have to move out to different city or state. Other most popular reason is work. In recent times, we see many multinational companies setting up offices in metro cities around the countries attracting students and experienced workers alike. These high paying jobs comes with a cost for the candidate to move away from their families. Not to mention, one unpopular reason which people secretly wish and drives them to move out is freedom! Yes, young people want to live life on their own terms and not abide by rules of their parents but set their own path, which actually makes them independent and opens many door of opportunities.
Talking about my experience, I had to move out for higher education as my hometown did not have colleges I would like. After finishing college, normal choice was to join good company with good pay which led me even further from home. Also, I always wanted to travel the world and experience all aspects of life so I decided to move to different country. Although, I was drifting farther away from family and missed many major events, this experience actually made me appreciate it even more. I would not do this any other way even if given chance.
So, you may ask how can we bring everyone together? One big excuse is holidays, Christmas or Diwali, festivals brings people all around the world together for celebrations. Now, this may not work always as I have missed many festivals being abroad. Other way to connect is to plan vacation together, this needs more planning of course but we have done in past where all siblings can meet in a common city close for everyone. It is better than flying all the way to home.
In conclusion, today moving away from family is more like necessity and there is not sign of it slowing down. It does send people away from families but also brings more opportunities for individuals and in the end they do appreciate each other even more by staying apart but still close to heart.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Today
...ll living close by and in the same town.Today we see this equation even further divin...
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Line 3, column 820, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun door seems to be countable; consider using: 'many doors'.
Suggestion: many doors
...tually makes them independent and opens many door of opportunities. Talking about my e...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'work'.
Suggestion: always work
...her for celebrations. Now, this may not work always as I have missed many festivals being a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, still, then, as to, in conclusion, of course, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 472.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70762711864 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4232954158 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53813559322 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9609627874 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190232701516 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492662943407 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480288837587 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107147995663 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537008116488 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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