It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
it has became possible for many scientists to travel in order to contorl the natural enviroment, as the South Pole for instance.
This thing has of course a number of benifits that can add a lot to the society and the natural ecosystem, it gives a valuble ability to human to depict the causes of many enviomental phenomena, espacially those requiering the reach of certain place on the glope to check what is happening like volcanoes and earth quackes, this way scientist and many of photograghy amateurs have become in direct contact with the phenomenon cause, making it easier from one side to implement many recearchs on-site with no need to wait for the lab results form scientists point of view, lessening the time needed for new discovories to be found. and from another side photographers can edit their captured views in the same time they are taking it.
these enchancments are of much importance among any other since the on-site recearchs have the chance to make changes to enviroment and control many phenomena preventing some of them from happening or affecting the planet.
on the other hand there are some drawback for these movements or travels, some types of amaetuers like adventurers love to experiance dangers when it is possible to get to those research-regard sites, many tourtists are crazy enough to show up some of their capabilities in front of their friends and put themselfs in hazardous situations. however no other bad outcomes are of importance regarding the availbility to travel to natural envirmental places since all most of them are safe enough to either excute recearchs and gather informations or to have cool holidays with family or friends.
in concluction, the advantegous things in traveling to such places overcome its disadvantages up to now, Moreover logically the scientific value gained from these trasnlations cannot be ignored or compared to imagine-based studies taken place in labortaries usually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15047021944 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88917011908 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595611285266 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.590634065 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.714285714 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.5714285714 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183685726461 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888327770911 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855195215559 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114246738746 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887223479884 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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