Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment?
It is true that implementing common punishment for all crimes can be an effective way to protect the society. While this regulation has many benefits, there are also drawbacks which are worth considering.
Having a fixed punishment will reduce the criminal’s intention to create crimes. It could aware the offenders that any kind of offense will be punished with a strong law, and deter them from criminal activities. For example, in Saudia Arabia, there have a law for burglar, is cut a hand of lawbreaker irrespective of items were stolen. In addition, this punishment system is easy to implementation and less time consuming for verdict. Hence, victims would not suffer for long judgment process. In this way, having a fixed punishment can divert the criminal from anti-social work and people enjoy a safe society.
However, despite the above mentioned advantages for having a fixed retribution, it has a negative effect in a society. This situation is against the fair and egalitarian society. People will receive same punishment whether their crimes are major and minor, and they would lose the respect for laws. As a result, criminals could be encouraged to involve multitude crimes. A recent survey shows that in Bangladesh, 30% younger burglar become Hijacker in their adult age because they aware the punishment will be the same imprisonment for that crimes. Another down side is that teenage offenders will deprive from rehabilitation. They have to stay with same prison with other criminals and motivate to involve illegal activities. Thus, this could increase the social crime rates which are not desirable outcome for a country.
In conclusion, it seems that the potential dangers of providing a similar punishment for all crimes in a society are more significant than the possible merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25085910653 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85324786341 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1962201596 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8823529412 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346648670962 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103785028019 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823440469478 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207405622301 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511829808496 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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