More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days demand for fashionable items of high-end brand are dramatically growing. Many people would tend to buy luxury goods like clothes, automobiles, accessories and so forth. There are several reasons why the number of famous brands' buyers has been increasing. This essay will analyse the mentioned issue with a reasonable conclusion that it has a harmful impact on both individuals and society.
Primarily, this is a strong competition in the fashion industry. Long ago, there were only few well-known trade name producers so they control and monopolize the industry. The consumer who is using luxury brand commodities to feel fulfilled and they find these brands strongly trustworthy. Indeed, purchasing goods from famous brands arouses the buyers’ interest to a large extent and they find it difficult to engage with new, unknown brands which perhaps with advancement design and higher quality as opposed to well-known items. This situation is compounded by the fact that people sometimes through this mindset are compelled to enjoy the things with poor quality. Furthermore, it is an irrefutable fact that possessing these types of products convey a sense of wealth, social status and accomplishment. In some societies, for instance, people believe that individuals’ personality has direct relation to their luxury items.
Nevertheless, in my personal perspective, this trend can have detrimental impacts not only on individuals but also on societies as whole. From a social standpoint, in these communities, people will be judged and respected based on their affordability rather than their real accomplishments or moral values. On a customers’ level, since more people have tended to provide real and excellent famous brands, the producer of well-known brands are more likely to sacrifice quality and just pay attention to quantity. In fact, the buyers because of their failing to recognize should pay the higher price for fake goods and at the result they are faced with financial issues.
To sum up, the increased consumption of trade name products might virtually have more relevance to people’s daily lives, but in my opinion this tendency is disadvantageous to both society and individuals.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49855072464 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06133340798 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605797101449 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5952672593 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5625 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190213466472 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564992117118 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049434266961 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114313196842 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307131211624 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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