As technology has been outpacing, our world has become a global village. Now people from different countries are closer than the past. Because of this change many people overwhelming this change as I do, however other oppose it. In this essay, I will discuss how globalization is beneficial for our progress as it has improved our person to person contact and helped our civilization to grow in a positive manner.
First of all, There are people who stand against the globalization and justified their view with few reasons. They believe that globalization helped developed nations more compared to poor countries. For an example, African countries which consist huge natural resources, always oppose this concept, they feel globalization allowed foreign companies to enter into their boundaries and start the business and the outcome of this change is most of the local companies are either closed or facing problems to survive in the market. Therefore, they stand against the concept of globalization.
On the other side, When We Considered the positive points of globalization it overcomes the problem which was mentioned and raised by third world countries. First plus point is globalization has increased the scope of growth or individual as well as countries also. For an example, An Indian company named as "Relience" was established in late 1970, but because of globalization which allows them to do business in other countries, now this industry come upder the list of top ten companies in the world. As a result of this many new jobs are generated which helped to figure out the unemployment ratio. Thus, Globalization has a vital role to enhance the life of people and it is helping us to tackle the issues like jobs and social securities.
To conclude, As I mentioned there are few nations which are against with the term of globalization, but as the world is getting closer and new scope is created in many aspects, sooner or later good points of globalization will sidestep the issues which now appear as a blackspot for third world nations.
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...list of top ten companies in the world. As a result of this many new jobs are gene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, third, thus, well, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08504398827 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95625609938 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527859237537 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.016474994 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267596604294 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932413312359 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380256375288 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160580985212 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359879700416 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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