News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

Essay topics:

News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

News is a medium of getting connected to the events and incidents happening around the world. Most of the people consider news to be highly important in order to keep themselves updated. Bad news are broadcasted with higher frequency as compared to good, because it attracts majority of readers and listener. I certainly feel that reporters should also focus on good happenings too.

The fundamental reason for people deeming news as highly significant is owing to their urge of keeping themselves updated. News helps people in staying connected with every nook and corner of the world. To exemplify, students who are preparing for government jobs’ entrance exams, general knowledge is a key to success and news are the only medium to help them in this. Thus, news are source of information related to everything that’s going on in the world, satisfying the need of people to keep themselves updated.

Secondly, Media today is mostly focusing on showing bad incidents over good ones because these are easy attention gainer. No doubt, today news are being sold to earn money and bad news instantly increases the TRP of news channels and boosts up the sale of newspapers. To illustrate, when Indian army conducted surgical strikes on Pakistan’s militant camp, every news channel and newspaper was broadcasting the same news again and again. News 18 earned a lot during this time as compared to NDTV, which was not reporting this event. Hence, broadcasting bad news over good ones is chosen by editors and reporters to gain publicity.

Finally, News mediums should take it as responsibility and should showcase the fair face of society, by broadcasting the good news as well. This approach can help in creating a positive mindset in peoples’ mind; thereby effecting the society in a positive manner. To illustrate, In the month of June 2019, a news clip went viral showcasing a request made a young girl to save nature; resulting to tree plantation drives being organised in every country. This proves that good news has a power to leave a positive mark on people’s mind -- which should be paid attention by media.

To conclude, this essay discussed: firstly, significance of news for people because of their urge to keep themselves informed. Secondly, importance is paid to bad news which in brief is because of the easy attention gaining property of such news. Finally, the good news should also be focused upon, to which I strongly advocate, because of it’s positive impact on society.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in brief, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10869565217 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78932290222 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533816425121 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4747436413 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495694074416 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178346443249 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781115602814 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320352715228 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337640273797 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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