Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Fatness has become a vexing problem in the various countries which leads to significant health and social difficulties for the people. This essay sheds light on the reasons behind this happening and measures to handle this problem.
The one evident obstacle is the sedentary lifestyle of the people. Owing to technological advancements, especially computer and internet has decreased the demand for physical activity in every aspect of life. Consequently, this phenomenon increases the body mass index which further leads to several cardiovascular diseases such as heart attack. However, this can be rectified by motivating the staff to use the bicycles to go to their offices and even several pathways should be constructed in industries instead of the accelerators and lifts. For instance, in the confined area of Google, it is mandatory for the employees to use the only cycle for travelling instead of electric cars or petroleum vehicle.
Another obvious hindrance is the easy availability of unhealthy food. Nowadays, people are in the rat race to earn more and they have not enough time to cook their own food. They prefer to buy fast food from the several outlets within minutes which save their time and energy such as Burger, pizzas. This can be also perfectly tackled by encouraging the restaurants and food outlets to offer the healthy food by showing its benefits and governments should also take initiatives to supply the raw materials to the owners at cheap prices to promote the healthy food. For instance, a good food chain Sub Way has committed to providing the healthy salad wrapped in the zero fat slices of bread, to its customers.
To conclude, although, stoutness has become a serious threat for the people, however, it can be perfectly curbed by applying the appropriate solutions such as doing physical activity & adoption of healthy food.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al activity & adoption of healthy food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18481848185 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78535686467 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2201298892 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0509733267795 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188612377707 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272811470449 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0376455480378 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359436563583 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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