In recent years, foreign travels have been increasing rapidly. However, the majority of these journeys to a distant land are made by international students seeking foreign tertiary education abroad and various reasons are raised as to why it has become a norm, the essay will look at the possible causes and also why I will consider such venture myself.
To begin with, one of the reasons why people prefer this path is to secure superior education. As different countries vary in level of development they differ in the quality of learning obtainable. Nonetheless, the first world states offer far more in the standard of learning and are hosts to the highly ranked universities in the world much more than the
third world countries. Hence, individuals from these regions of less development are eager to spend even much resources in other to secure a better learning. For instance, it is estimated that over 5 million foreign scholars seek admission in UK universities annually and 60 percent of these are from developing nations.
Another reason why the majority of people tend to pursue the trend is to secure employment. It is a well known practice that the easiest way to get a job in a country is to study there. Additionally, persons that want to be expats in a different geographical entity feel that the most appropriate means to achieve that is to get a degree in that land. For example, Canada continues to see a spike in the number of permanent resident applicants through their Canadian experience class, which consist of hosts of graduate international students that do not want to go back.
In conclusion, getting a degree outside my nation will be an interesting fit that I would want to embark on, because I will be exposed to a higher standard of learning which will not only qualify me to reside and work in a different region if I so wish, but will in turn enlighten me to various cultures and traditions outside the one am used to.
In recent years, foreign travels have been increasing rapidly. However, the majority of these journeys to a distant land are made by international students seeking foreign tertiary education abroad and various reasons are raised as to why it has become a norm, the essay will look at the possible causes and also why I will consider such venture myself.
To begin with, one of the reasons why people prefer this path is to secure superior education. As different countries vary in level of development they differ in the quality of learning obtainable. Nonetheless, the first world states offer far more in the standard of learning and are hosts to the highly ranked universities in the world much more than the
third world countries. Hence, individuals from these regions of less development are eager to spend even much resources in other to secure a better learning. For instance, it is estimated that over 5 million foreign scholars seek admission in UK universities annually and 60 percent of these are from developing nations.
Another reason why the majority of people tend to pursue the trend is to secure employment. it is a well known practice that the easiest way to get a job in a country is to study there. Additionally, persons that want to be expats in a different geographical entity feel that the most appropriate means to achieve that is to get a degree in that land. For example, Canada continues to see a spike in the number of permanent resident applicants through their Canadian experience class, which consist of hosts of graduate international students that do not want to go back.
In conclusion, getting a degree outside my nation will be an interesting fit that I would want to embark on, because I will be exposed to a higher standard of learning which will not only qualify me to reside and work in a different region if I so wish, but will in turn enlighten me to various cultures and traditions outside the one am used to.
- Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education Why do people do this Would you consider doing this yourself and why 84
- In recent years foreign travels have been increasing rapidly However the majority of these journeys to a distant land are made by international students seeking foreign tertiary education abroad and various reasons are raised as to why it has become a nor 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s path is to secure superior education. As different countries vary in level of de...
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Suggestion:
...ersities in the world much more than the third world countries. Hence, individual...
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Suggestion: many
...ess development are eager to spend even much resources in other to secure a better l...
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Suggestion: It
...rsue the trend is to secure employment. it is a well known practice that the easie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, third, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83136094675 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76466427971 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582840236686 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0402763724 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271119266757 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918767760764 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134458611888 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153549197914 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213325614104 0.056905535591 375% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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