The right attitude and specific action related to the pandemic

Essay topics:

The right attitude and specific action related to the pandemic

At the end of 2019, corona outbreaks broke out in Wuhan (China), then has spread out to many countries around the world. On March 11th 2020 according to Vietnam time, WHO officially declared the Covid-19 epidemic to a global pandemic. What should we do in the face of increasing complexity of Covid-19?

First of all, we need to follow the instructions of the Ministry of Health. We should wear medical masks properly, this is the best way for us to avoid direct sourced of infection. Besides, we should wash our hands with soap properly for about 20-30 seconds when going out and after coughing, sneezing.

Secondly, we should not reserve masks and food to avoid inflation. We must always trust the Vietnamese government because when there is an emergency situation they will have a solutions. In addition, we need to avoid crowded places such as shopping centers, cinemas, theaters… as the way to protect myself from the Covid-19 epidemic.

Finally, what we need to do now is fight fake news and not share fake news on social networks. Moreover, we should follow news on TV or mainstream sited like the Ministry of Health and the Government.

All in all, we need to be very calm and have the right attitude in this sensitive time. I believe that we will conquer Covid-19.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a solution' or simply 'solutions'?
Suggestion: a solution; solutions
...s an emergency situation they will have a solutions. In addition, we need to avoid crowded ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81900452489 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56482466986 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9735716357 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.9230769231 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0230476038505 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00929313423545 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321923613147 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0192778509782 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385557019564 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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