Science tells us about the activities which are good for our health and others which are bad. Millions of people all over the world knows this and still do unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is and what can be done to change it?
The developed science have its positove and negative sides. Some people think it is good for human well-being, however, some people use science to do negative activities. This essay will discuss this statement and give some useful solutions.
First of all, the reason why people continue to do unhealthy things is that they have too much stress such as the problem of working condition, family relationship and friendship.This means people may take illegal drugs which invented by scientists who tend to have bad purposes. In addition, young people often suffer from this case as they may face different setbacks during their growth and friends between youth may try to attract them to take the drugs. Those are the reasons for some people keep doing unhealthy behaviours.
Secondly, negative activities can earn lots of money is another reason for some people doing these activities such as selling drugs. There many people addict on using drugs for release pressure, party excitement and medical treatment. Some people think organise a market to sell drugs can earn money easily and there are obvious some people need them. Therefore, for financial aspect, people rather risk themself for survival than not stop doing the bad activities.
Finally, I think governments should manage those situation to decrease unhealthy activities which is a threat for people’s health. For example, professional license need to be hold for someone who selling drugs and teach them the right method of using it such as the maximum amount of using. Furthermore, giving warning and apply penalty for those of who selling drugs without license and someone who overtaking it, or even sending them to jail if they addict on drugs seriously and provide a quitting drug lesson.
In conclusion, although there are positive things on science, it still have some drawbacks, such as illegal activities. In my view, government should produce some useful policy to avoid it continues happen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24921135647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57289897457 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577287066246 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6899760213 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7333333333 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259820634028 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956940243263 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645808637331 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139322621417 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614861777321 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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