Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times even on holidays Does this development have more disadvantages than advantages

Essay topics:

Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays.
Does this development have more disadvantages than advantages?

In the world of cut throat competition, employers are chasing their workforce to be in office round the clock all throughout the year. While this strategy may work in some cases, I think it has more negatives than positives. Also, the trend will remove work life balance and affect health negatively.

On the one hand, it has been observed that employees who are contacted during their vacations to support office will feel exhausted, frustrated and tortured. This forces them to take decision of leaving the firm which is a loss of experienced workforce. In some cases, families of few workers are disturbed due to improper work-life balance affecting future of their children. For instance, parents are not able to devote time to their children which leads to poor examination results. Additionally, workers will have poor concentration since they were not able to relax and reenergize during their vacations. Every person is entitled to have quality time away from project work, proved by research.

On the other hand, some organizations work round the clock to support their multi-national clients. For instance, outsourcing and call-center companies need their workforce to support the projects around the world. For example, people are contacted to run the business even when they are on a break. This keeps the show on by keeping normalcy and fluency of the project. In addition, one is up to date with current status of the work and can start contributing immediately when he/she returns from holidays.

To sum up, it is need of the hour for the firms to contact their employees when they are on a break. However, it is recommended to give them their due time off without disturbing too much of their personal lives.

Votes
Average: 9.5 (6 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... show on by keeping normalcy and fluency of the project. In addition, one is up t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0487804878 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72937306939 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8711574642 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203259006656 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615418344115 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362986481615 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120301027351 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03073310269 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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