Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Toys are the assets of a developing child which make our childhood memorable.It is true that playthings play an essential role in the development of a child.As per the stated notion,parents buy a variety of toys for their children which has its own pros and cons.This essay will debate about their merits and demerits.
On the one hand,it is undeniable that playing with a large number of toys can enhance development skills of a young one.In other words toys meant for educational purposes can boost intellectual development,motor development as well as cognitive abilities of a pupil at a very young age.Since preschoolers have the ability to learn and adapt new skills at the very first age of life.Moreover,their knowledge is enhanced and they learn analytical skills while playing using different techniques.For instance,a variety of playing stuffs have been available today which foster the psychological development of an offspring.Playthings such as building blocks,computerized games for educational motive have been proved to be efficient in learning words,numbers and language at the beginning stage of their life.
On the other hand,a plethora of toys have been provided by rich parents to their kids have demerits too.Most importantly,a child playing with a variety of toys instead of gaining skills tends to lose his interest.As a result get bored and his mental ability also gets effected.Due to its continuous usage and unable to involve in other activities because of tiredness and sometimes get irritated living in the same horizon which is narrowing despite of expanding.Furthermore,parents providing a range of toys negatively affects the behaviour of a young one towards life.To cite an example,they tend to ignore the monetary value and in turn develop a habit of having every stuff without knowing its importance.Additionaly,lack of interaction with others can also be seen in a kid having a large number of playthings.
All in all,every coin has two sides.Besides,toys help in the overall development of a child but having too many of them can have repercussions in other aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38554216867 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77114688735 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575301204819 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 20.2975951904 409% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 290.935130227 49.4020404114 589% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 447.0 106.682146367 419% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.0 20.7667163134 400% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 41.0 7.06120827912 581% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245826937084 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147411500928 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371233556223 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147411500928 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371233556223 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.5 13.0946893788 347% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.23 50.2224549098 -42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 11.3001002004 326% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.08 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 10.1190380762 348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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