Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay topics: Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There two different perspectives with regards to parents and childcare centre. On the first hand, parents believe that childcare centres are the best choice for children of preschool age.on the second hand, parents believe that grandparents will be better carers for their children. Therefore, I will argue here the two different point of views accordingly.

Nowadays, parents get busy with work whole day running to fullfil life requirements, as they don't have time to stay at home due to work pressure. However, most of the fathers and mothers are working to gain money to continue up their life naturally, due to high cost of living, as they have other responsibilities that they need to cover it up such home rent, school fees, and other home staff. Therefore, they found that childcare centers are the best place to leave them in it in their absence, but we believe that this centers request money for the purpose of taking care of their children, it will be added as extra expenditures for parents . In addition, it has passive consequences when leaving children at the care center, hence children look for compassion and love which it can not be found in these centers. For example, child care community showed in recent reports that immatures might be isolated and get more tough while staying far away of their families. As a result, the relation ship between children and parents are getting less effective.

On the contrary, parents who prefer to leave children with grandparents are the best means to take care of children, they saw it as an effective way. As a consequence, they save money as they will be rest of assured that their children in a safe place, as they provide the most important aspect which it is love, as it can be given to kids, which it is not available in the care center, so grandparents may give extra care to children, and controlling their behaviors, and updating their parents about it when they come back from work. However, grandparents' care has positive side which they can not feel that they are isolated while they are at home, because the environment which it has been provided to them is totally familiar, as they can be more effective.

In brief, we believe that childcare centers have pros and cons, but we believe that grandparent's care is more efficient and positive.

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...g to fullfil life requirements, as they dont have time to stay at home due to work p...
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... added as extra expenditures for parents . In addition, it has passive consequence...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in brief, as a result, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8564231738 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.610493516 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48362720403 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1060490254 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.307692308 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5384615385 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296849690557 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116196502289 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876442482258 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186234375174 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108368740799 0.056905535591 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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