Some people believe that cooking at home is a waste of time. They feel it is better to buy fast food which is more convenient and less stressful in modern life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

Essay topics:

Some people believe that cooking at home is a waste of time. They feel it is better to buy fast food which is more convenient and less stressful in modern life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

With the inception of modern era, plethora of changes occurred in the lifestyle of humans as earlier they are more keen to cook their food at homes but now their dependancy on the ready made foods is increasing. Many people have opinion that foods available at various restaurants is blessing as it is easily available and reduces the strain of cooking, while I believe that people should cook their food at their homes as it is more healthy while the fast food is the underlying reason of many health problems.

Admittedly, people have hectic schedule as they tend to work for longer hours and on many occasions, it can be stressful to cook food at home but we should not forgot the advantage of home cook food. According to the various surveys, if people want to keep their body fit, they should focus more on their diet while exercises are the secondary solution. Intake of all the essential nutrients are confined in home cook food. This can also be supported by the fact that average age of humans has been decreased from 80 years to 65 years only.

Indeed, fast foods are tasty and are readily available, but nutrients content are very low while the amount of trans and unsaturated fats are very high. These fats are major reason of the obesity and cardio vascular problems. As per reports submitted by the AIMS, New Delhi, it is found that obesity is the major reason for the decline of the average age. Furthermore, adequate cooking methods are not used in the restaurants as they want to serve as faster as they can and in the hurdle of hurry, a lot of necessary elements are lost.

Having dwelled on such thoughts, it is clear that home cook foods have many advantages over the readily available food and I suggest that people should try to cook their own food by proper ways.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... strain of cooking, while I believe that people should cook their food at their h...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'forget'
Suggestion: forget
... to cook food at home but we should not forgot the advantage of home cook food. Accord...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...aurants as they want to serve as faster as they can and in the hurdle of hurry, a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63009404389 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34421982635 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501567398119 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4294037194 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.272727273 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224579076574 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848240316385 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657129341846 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143297536539 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057931568451 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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