Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and community the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often thought youngsters ought to spend their leisure time doing some voluntary social activities that would be advantageous for both teenagers and society. In my opinion, I completely agree with this trend would help in the overall personality development of a juvenile with free services available to the community.
The first and foremost benefit is the development of numerous positive personality traits in teenagers. For instance, they would become helpful, kind and polite in nature. It would also aid them to improve social behaviour and the incorporation of various moral values and ethics in them. Apart from this, they could mention about their unpaid voluntary work in their resumes which might help them in the future to get preference in jobs over other candidates.
Another major advantage is the availability of a free young workforce to the community that could perform a number of tasks for the well-being of society. In other words, the youngsters can look after the old age group people, and could spend quality time with them. Consequently, lonely elder people will feel better and in return, younger ones could learn a lot from the life experiences of senior citizens. Besides, this would also lower down the crime rate, as the free minds of teenagers will be diverted to these productive and fruitful activities from other dangerous activities such as consuming drugs, indulging in bad society and so on.
In conclusion, I believe that the utilization of free time by a juvenile in performing some non-paid social works would make him or her a perfect human being who is going to establish a cornerstone for a better lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, if, look, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13553113553 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75698398615 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6469453896 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220215831699 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683032440637 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553519374936 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120894725165 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383544687901 0.056905535591 67% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.