Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work.
Which do you think is the best way to choose a career?
In our life choosing a career is an important factor to consider. If I had to choose between high salary and high level of enjoyment, I think I would choose the high salary. If I will choose a career for enjoyment basis only, I might not earn enough money. High paid jobs are beneficial socially and economically, as now will be discussed.
Practically, earning money is the main reason why we work. If a person is highly compensated he can support himself and his family needs for daily livings. Once we are in comfortable living in earning, we can pursue our personal interest in our free time. Aside from providing the basic necessities of life, giving us our wants would be possible too. For example, an employee with the annual income of P 1,000,000 per year could afford to avail a housing loan of P20, 000 monthly. So, those people with high wages could own a house which makes their lives comfortable. Furthermore, high paid people tend to have more time to socialise because they have enough money for parties and social gatherings. It is evident that choosing a career with high wages should be considered.
On one hand, having high income could boost our economy. In the sense that the higher the salary, the higher contribution they paid for taxes. Eventually, we can help develop our economy in the other way around. On the other hand, nowadays we are suffering from an economic crisis. All the prices are going up including the rapid increased in our electricity and water bills. The salary we get will not be enough for daily expenses. In order to combat these rising problems, the solution is ours to make. We should be wise enough in choosing the profession to fulfil which is economically practical. For example, the country's unemployment rate hit 27 percent equivalent to 12.4 million jobless Filipinos. Others are opted to accept low wages than having no job at all. The problem has taken place from the moment they have decided a career of their choice which is not in demand.
In conclusion, adequate salary could be very beneficial in regards to social and economic factors. It is the best way, for it can provide the basic needs for ourselves and our family. Therefore, I strongly believed that the future lies in our own hands. Being wise in decision making for attaining career goal with high salary are far more important than a career for enjoyment basis only that is impractical.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...our free time. Aside from providing the basic necessities of life, giving us our wants would be p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with high wages should be considered. On one hand, having high income could bo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f their choice which is not in demand. In conclusion, adequate salary could be ...
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...dequate salary could be very beneficial in regards to social and economic factors. It is the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...joyment basis only that is impractical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77088305489 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55729677681 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54892601432 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8115025633 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.037037037 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5185185185 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.37037037037 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220778022916 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062261608182 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698518978198 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162489569958 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888570796401 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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