Some people prefer cold weather conditions and some are hot weather conditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Every weather is important for human body. But people have preference, someone like cold and someone hot. Before give the conclusion first discuss the both side.
In cold weather there are so much cold outside but some people like it because in this time there are so many fresh vegetables everywhere. People who like to eat, he/she must be like this weather for food variation and freshness. Someone like cold weather because they love leisure time and in winter it is very comfortable to sleep into blanket. On the other hand, in winter it is difficult and time consuming to move one place to another because one has to wear so much cloth to protect their body from cold. In some places in the world, like-Canada, Europe, USA sometimes they have heavy snowfall in winter and it creates road block, power cut and other problem also.So many people do not like winter for it's inconvenience. Although, babies are suffering more in winter with cold, fever and sometimes asma. So i think most people do not prefer ice, gloomy weather.
Secondly, Hot weather is prefered by many people beacuse of it's shinness. Many people think warm weather is more comfotable and convenient. In this time it is so easy to go outside and it is the best time to go to holiday. That is why, every country there is summer holiday in school and offices. People who likes to wear designer cloths it is the best time for them because in summer it is easy to wear any kind of dress without thinking much. And babies are better in warm weather because it is easy go to park or outside to play which is most important for their physical and mental health.It is the best time to work outside work. But on the other side too much hot weather also is not good for the body. Sometimes it is so difficult to survive like- Middle East hot weather.
Discussing both side of arguent, we see that there is some good and bad things in every weather. But it is also important for human body and mental health also. Otherwise it is monotonous and boaring. But looking the both side, i personally prefer hot weather most for it's convenient and brightness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, i think, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59894459103 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3353621477 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456464379947 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3322754898 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2272727273 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2272727273 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289401001125 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100743577514 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078231978536 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206208565125 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323182483833 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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