Many people claim that printed magazines and newspaper selling are decreased due to the emerging of online books. In my perspective, I totally disagree with this notion and fervently believe that traditional articles still hold a key role in the stock market.
First of all, number of people into flipping back and forth pages in books are large in proportion to the population because printed newspaper or magazines offer avid readers concentration. Reading printed newspaper is less interrupted than scrolling a web page in which many advertisement pop up and for the most time, detering readers from absorbing the content. On top of that, using phone to read an article may be distracted in terms of the frequent announcement from apps like instagram or facebook. For example, during reading an online press, one receive a notification from his friends posting a vaccation photos, for most cases could not he resist to check it. To sum up, people would prefer savouring of printed books to e books simply because of the focusing it offers.
Secondly, printed magazines and newspapers are easily to be accessed compared to E-books which requires internet connection. Human nowadays could come across a printed document while sitting in public places like station, supermarket or beauty salons, which in other words could back people to gain access to hot news and insights. And reading online press could be delayed due to the unavailability of wifi, otherwise, it prohibitively expensive to hire wifi connection. For instance, preparing for a voyage, people would feel pleasure to bring along a printed magazines because they would be struggling to read online articles without wifi connection on the ocean. To conclude, the large scale of printed books and its availability make people use it more prevalently than e-books.
In conclusion, many say that printed news paper and magazines circulation will decline and is inferior to online publications; however, this is unneccessarily true because of the concentration it brings and its large availibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'readers'' or 'reader's'?
Suggestion: readers'; reader's
...inted newspaper or magazines offer avid readers concentration. Reading printed newspape...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'resists'.
...ion photos, for most cases could not he resist to check it. To sum up, people would pr...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'magazine'?
... feel pleasure to bring along a printed magazines because they would be struggling to rea...
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
... In conclusion, many say that printed news paper and magazines circulation will decline ...
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...n it brings and its large availibility.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28875379939 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91316099131 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589665653495 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3469262378 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.846153846 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141647272433 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577219903359 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043483334715 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945154392079 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175928193843 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.