some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choices of clothes. Do you agree or disagree with opinion?
People around the world has different clothing style. While some people argue that a person's traditional values and behavior can be judged based on their dressing style, I personally disagree with this opinion completely, and this essay will discuss the reasons for my disagreement in detail.
There are people who argue that a person's choice of clothing depicts their overall personality. This is mainly because it is assumed that people wear attires that suits their social status. If a person is seen wearing a luxury brand clothing such as Gucci, Armani, and so on then people always presume that they are either wealthy or a highly qualified professional who holds higher status in the society. Whereas, this kind of clothing might not be their everyday choice.
Conversely, I personally believe that this a subjective argument as a person's personality cannot be judged by their clothing preference. This argument is inaccurate because people often wear clothes based on their comfort level and occasion, whereby their clothing style might not be the actual representation of their personality. One good illustration of this is the dressing style of Mr Bill Gates, the richest man alive in the world. Although he can afford expensive or branded clothes, he is often seen wearing a simple shirt and pants unlike other rich people. This shows that we cannot judge a person based on their looks.
In conclusion, I reiterate that I disagree with people who perceive that the clothing style of person is represents their character and culture. This is because majority of the people wear clothes which is comfortable to them instead of showing off their social status.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...who holds higher status in the society. Whereas, this kind of clothing might not be the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, look, so, then, whereas, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14652014652 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64168347723 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1725996082 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248703694306 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112707574845 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702470415091 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182789827303 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271328731797 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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