In this 21st century, competency and hard work go hand in hand for achieving success. It is believed that most of the people taste success by their hard work, luck and their unmatched skill set. According to me, for getting success hard work and talent play an equal role. While having talent is not only the key thing, but also exhibiting the talent through hard work is very important. We can discuss the essence of success through the below essay with relevant examples
It is inevitable that people need some medium such as hard work to show off one’s talent. For example, notable sports pers...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...rk, luck and their unmatched skill set. According to me, for getting success hard work and tale...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...one's talent. For example, notable sports person such as Sachin, Jadaja, Ajay kum...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fruitful way" with adverb for "fruitful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...mportant to show off one's ability in a fruitful way. On the contrary, it is meritorious...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a constructive manner" with adverb for "constructive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...we have talents, hard work will be paid in a constructive manner. A recent survey shows that about 70% p...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ictory. We should fortify our skill set in a positive way. It is my hope that young generation wi...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an optimistic way" with adverb for "optimistic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... generation will make use of technology in an optimistic way and work towards achieving success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, similarly, so, whereas, while, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43011721506 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8359831325 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0952380952 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477448335861 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154780108442 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108399975125 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302324634018 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639712184737 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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