Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime(misdeed, unlawful act, illegal act).Discuss both views and give your opinion
Criminal activities have been increasing over the last few years which ultimately affects society’s wellbeing. Due to this, several people think that to decrease this illegal acts extended prison sentences is the more appropriate way. While others with dissimilar thoughts think that there have been numerous alternatives which can be utilised. Thorough scrutiny of the above will lead to an insightful response.
While it is convenient to adopt one aspect over the other, I prefer to represent a counterbalanced ergo(accordingly)objective assessment. In my opinion, people, who have committed crime must be punished for longer period and most probably be secluded from community. However, to diminish the crime, finding the root cause and giving criminal a second chance play a significant role to improvise nation altogether. The subsequent two paragraphs will detail both aspects(constituents/ parts) extensively.
First and foremost, anyone from the society doing misdeed should be given a punishment which is frightening. So that other people around will be afraid of doing such illegal acts. Secondly, keeping these criminal minds away from remaining impressional minds, eventually, will help in demolishing the criminal thoughts. For instance, A study published in the crime magazine has proved that a frustrating prisoner could impact teenagers after their punishment is over, for the purpose of revenge.
On the contrary, second chance given in life could make a significant difference to someone or their immediate family who has gone through a difficult time. So, By identifying the reason of the crime and then accordingly deciding the punishment period is worthy. Furthermore, free voluntarily services from prisoners to improve society could also be an effective way to rejuvenate their own minds. Moreover, awareness campaigns also could help hand in hand in eradicating the root causes of the misdeeds. In support of the above, In Netherlands, prisons are managed in such a way that each and every criminal’s reason for the act is identified and then accordingly the improvisation procedures are followed.
Keeping all of the above-mentioned facts in mind, benefits such as keeping impressionable minds away from the affected criminals and balance between healthy community and unlawful activities are evident. In contrast, components such as another opportunity to criminals to be worthy to society and to decrease the root causes of the crimes are well worthy of equivalent consideration. To conclude, as is with most things in life, there are two sides to the matter. Fortunately, in this case, both of these can be constructive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54166666667 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27273254428 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6128904675 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04761904762 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1511113234 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403147211285 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465345921957 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822926907936 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318524645705 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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