Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Friends are an important part of an individuals social life and we often come across people who either agrees or disagrees with our point of view. While some people believe that it is essential to befriend those who holds the same opinion as them, others believe that friends who disagrees and do not hesitate to put forth their point forward should be around. I agree with the latter and in the following paragraphs I will put forth my reasons before giving a personal opinion.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why people should have friends who might have different viewpoints. Even though friends support one another and may have similar views on several factors but disagreeing on certain views aids in understading the different perspectives of people’s thoughts. Consequently, people can have meaningful and enlightening conversations or debate on topics without having to worry about offending the other person.
Moreover, disagreements not only provide insights about different viewpoints but also facilitates in understanding facts that were previously unknown or unclear. It makes people question the existing information and encourage humans to look for answers thereby leading to new areas of knowledge. Consequently, it broaden the horizons on a number of domains. For example, during a cricket match when friends sit together, each person supports a different team which leads them to discuss about their favourite players strategies or any personal information that was not known to others.
To recapitulate, I strongly opine that friends should ocassionally disagree and put forth their points so that people can engage in insightful conversations and gain more knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
Friends are an important part of an individuals social life and we often come across pe...
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Line 1, column 462, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ll put forth my reasons before giving a personal opinion. To begin with, there are numerous rea...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'broadens'?
Suggestion: broadens
...ew areas of knowledge. Consequently, it broaden the horizons on a number of domains. Fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43773584906 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89696321523 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649056603774 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1741224798 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377983938779 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128035100423 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103030130358 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203420062475 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123404650122 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.