Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In this modern world, parenting has become a challenging task for most people, and they are raising a concern to introduce classes from high school for young people on parenting. In my opinion, I totally disagree that teaching people how to raise kids doesn't make one a good parent, and I will be giving supporting my opinion in this essay, adding a few skills for good parenting.
Being a parent in this society is a tough job and it has its own greatness. To be a good parent, first, we have to be a good person who can manage people very well. Introducing courses in school may not have an impact on young people, because parenting has to be experienced and cannot be taught. In the young age, students may not be having that maturity to understand parenting. For example, I have two kids and I was not taught any skills at my young age on how to be a good parent. Moreover, I have observed my cousins raising their kids and what they do to make their kids happy. This would be enough for a person to learn how to look after the kids very well.
Talking about the skills that are essential to be a good parent, people should have patience and tolerance. As we know kids do a lot of mess around house when they are below 10 years, in this case, we have to be patient and calm. When they grow up we have to tolerate what they ask for and how they behave, but we have to give them the right advice when they need it.
Finally, I would conclude that the main skills required for a person to be a good father or mother are, to manage people and handle the situations patiently. Maturity is what we need for being a parent and we get that as we grow up, and I strongly believe this cannot be taught as a course.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... that teaching people how to raise kids doesnt make one a good parent, and I will be g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, look, may, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25382262997 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28650080389 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474006116208 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6115850963 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450640397633 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191636088332 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102425623631 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304760667809 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892238725772 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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