Nowadays, This is an interesting topic to be discussed that man and women according to their qualities fit at different positions at work.As per my opinion I somehow agree to this statement that their are some certain jobs which are suitable for men not for women and vice-versa.In accordance with this statement I would say like for example, in Traditional time, men used to work to feed his family and provide all basic needs to his family,just like a breadfidder to his family ,also he used to work day and night in order to fulfill all the necessities of his family.
Indeed, In that scenario, Men is the only person who works to earn some money whereas women were homemakers to take care of the house and family.However, If we compare old time with the current time it is not possible for the men to work alone in this high budget market,As time passes, needs of the people plus standard of living also increases,thus,to meet these raising demands along both should work to survive.
Certainly, both can do their jobs according to the qualities that best suits them, for example, if a women has good communication skills she can work as a Receptionist, else if she is good at new fashion trends, then Fashion Designing could be the best women for her.Therefore, In this way their are plathora of jobs that are available that women can opt for according to her qualities. On the other side, Men has also plenty of jobs available that he can chose according to his qualities and career like Engineer, Doctor, Builder etc.
Hence, I would say that according to someone's qualities and capabilities they can chose their jobs that best suits them.
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...nes qualities and capabilities they can chose their jobs that best suits them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73829580011 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.388262507 49.4020404114 345% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.6 106.682146367 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.6 20.7667163134 277% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302812011628 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142426579426 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697692848428 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15922602536 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722986273639 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 13.0946893788 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 11.3001002004 215% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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