Some people think that there will be a decrease in international travel in the future. Do you think that the less amount of international travel is a positive or a negative development?
Some people think that there will be a decrease in international travel in the future. Do you think that the less amount of international travel is a positive or a negative development?
It is believed by some people that traveling to different foreign countries will not be as common in the future as it is currently. I believe it is a negative development as it will not only drastically hamper the economy of the countries but it will also badly affect international relationships. This essay will discuss both these factors in detail.
The foreign trips increase the world economy colossally. These trips not only enhance the Aviation Industry but also act as a backbone for the tourism industry. A report from the World Aviation Organization has shown that there has been a drastic increase of 65% in the income from the Aviation Field globally for the year 2016. While analyzing the factors responsible for such a significant increase, the number of flights to and from the different countries was found to be the main reason for this increase. Furthermore, it boosts the tourism sector immensely. The tourists bring in a lot of money into the counties they travel. These visitors prove to be an important financial asset for both private as well as public sectors. The hotel and restaurant owners, shopkeepers, and travel agencies etc. get immense benefits. Thus, the decreased number of international visits will affect the economy of nations very badly.
On the other hand, the trips and travels to different countries have resulted in strengthening the relationships between them. The world has become a global platform where the inhabitants tend to understand and respect each other’s customs and traditions resulting in escalating their relationships both at national as well as international level. Recently, a report was telecasted by National Geography named “Understanding Between The Nations: Now And Then”, it indicated that due to the frequent visits people are now more aware of the ground situations and, therefore, this first-hand experience keeps them informed, as a result, they develop love and respect for each other. Thus, international ties are better nowadays. Previously, the globe was like a closed system where the movement of individuals was very less, therefore, the international ties were not as strong as they are right now. Thus, if the world is again forced to be a closed system then the relationships will certainly deteriorate.
In conclusion, I believe that the increased number of travels is a positive move and if this number decreases certainly it will have a number of drawbacks. It will not only affect the global economy but it will also worsen the international relationships. Thus, the governments should come forward and help in increasing the number of international travels by taking measures like reducing the tax rate at international flights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2460.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 469.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24520255864 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09237254309 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481876332623 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 764.1 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3004875328 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5416666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398339664427 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125504207193 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190254330596 0.0667982634062 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334734247071 0.151304729494 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.337847708127 0.056905535591 594% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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