Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
For the last 30 years, a lot of sportsmen have become famous and can earn the great deal of money. While people who contribute more for society, such as scientists, doctors, teachers have small salaries comparing with people in sport. This situation causes lots of arguments about fairness of amount of money famous sportsmen receive. I believe that these salaries are fair enough and I will explain why.
First of all, people have been underestimating merits people in sport contributing to society. Most part of population of my country spend it leisure time watching TV. The top-rated program of Ukrainian television is football game. It’s popular among people of all ages and I think, a popular sport program is a cure for our mind and soul and it’s very important.
There second important fact is that sport stars have other way of life. They spend most their time in sport facilities, as they need to be in a good shape. Football, basketball, volleyball players waste lots of energy and health. There is necessity for them to undergo special medical observations and treatments, to spend a lot of money for sports nutrition, exclude bad habits and list goes on and on. There is also a social media that takes a lot sportsman’ time. I don’t think that famous people have a private life at all. People who weren’t in sportsman’s shoes can’t imagine how hard is it.
On another flip of the coin, there are very important professions underrated by authorities. I’d like to say that governments ought to value the contribution of people in science, medicine, education by increasing their wages. However, sport stars’ salaries are totally justified, as they are very important to community.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'i think', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277620396601 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.150141643059 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0849858356941 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0254957507082 0.0501214627716 51% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0481586402266 0.0437548338989 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124645892351 0.122226691241 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0226628895184 0.0403226058552 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90551740561 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0198300283286 0.0326793684256 61% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0509915014164 0.0861772015684 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0113314447592 0.021408717616 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014164305949 0.011925033212 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1746.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12631578947 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357894736842 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263157894737 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150877192982 0.137316102897 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90551740561 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 69.0746120209 60.7387585426 114% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8333333333 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6906106203 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.814263465372 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 42.149122807 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.89873417722 1.69124875643 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282762879865 0.332605444948 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0624091751161 0.102741220458 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0496319804636 0.0668466124924 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.447192106605 0.534860350844 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115826944437 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929078658097 0.134430193775 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479153807298 0.0742795772207 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.306232532149 0.324371583561 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0565512199183 0.0638462369009 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182251860561 0.228012699653 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582554243575 0.058150111329 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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