Today, more and more students are deciding to move a different country for highier studies.Do you think that the benefits of this outweigh the problems.

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Today, more and more students are deciding to move a different country for highier studies.Do you think that the benefits of this outweigh the problems.

Foreign universities are preferred choice for the higher education, over the institutions in the home country. Certainly studying abroad pose challenges to a student, but over the course of time advantages outweigh the short-term disadvantages.
Firstly, people get to learn world class education with the plethora of study materials in foreign colleges. These universities have state of the art infrastructure which aid in research and projects. This really amplifies imaginative capabilities of the students as they learn in-depth knowledge of the subject. Students become mentally tough by living in foreign conditions which are different from home. They learn to live on their own, as well as manage expenses with limited or no income. Furthermore, placement cells of these prestigious and world known universities support students in securing their future by placing them in the top companies of the world.
On the other hand, there are always risks associated in alien conditions when one travels to study abroad. First, course fees can become expensive due to currency exchange risk. One may end up paying more fees to pursue the course. Sometimes homesickness might affect them too as they may miss their families and friends which inadvertently affect their studies, and lastly their grades in the college.

To sum up, pursuing foreign education is the growing trend with a number of benefits but one should assess all the options from various perspectives, before pursuing a course from a foreign university.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, really, so, well, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88247543655 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634453781513 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1271660461 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900131941978 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305224995036 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307835340646 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482678973344 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181026923398 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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