The use of cell phones (mobiles phones) has grown rapidly in the past few years. People use them for both business and personal reasons.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of the widespread use of cell phones (mobile phones)? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Cellphones were introduced in early 2000’s and faced rapid growth in just few years. As per a recent survey, 73% of world population use cell phones. Cellphones are used for business as well as personal reasons. Cellphones gained sudden popularity due to number of advantages. I shall discuss few of them below.
First of all, cellphones have removed barriers in people’s lives by providing a mode of communication on the go. Wherever we are, whenever we need, just dial a number and you are in communication within seconds. This has provided ease not just on personal level but on business level as well. Mobile data has provided access to emails on touch of a button. It is now easier than ever to stay in touch with vendors and customers.
Secondly with availability of clock, alarm, notes, reminders and maps. It has facilitated lives to keep track of valuable time. Whether you want to wake up in the morning or be at someplace for meeting, cellphone is there to help you. Once can use map to plan his/her journey and optimize travelling time by analyzing traffic trends.
With integration of social media & online games, cellphones keeps people entertained as well. Using social media keep people updated of latest news and events from around the globe.
With upside of everything, there are downsides too. Cellphones too have disadvantages Kids use cellphones to play games. They get too much involved in them that they start neglecting on their studies. My litter brother failed his exams as he neglected his studies due to excess use of cellphone.
A lot of accidents are happening these days due to wrong use cellphones. People get too occupied on their devices that they forget they are on road. Once they are occupies & loose their concentration, mishap happens. Wrong use of cellphones has costed a lot precious lives.
People nowadays, are being diagnosed with alot of posture related problems due to wrong posture maintained in using cellphones. Another problem which has surfaced is typer’s thumb. This is also caused by constant use of cellphones. Doctor’s say that major cause of Repititive strain injuries ‘RSI’ are unsafe use of mobilephones.
With these costs, there are alot of benefits of cellphones and benefits outweigh these costs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
... Using social media keep people updated of latest news and events from around the globe. ...
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Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to have'?
Suggestion: to have
...ng, there are downsides too. Cellphones too have disadvantages Kids use cellphones to pl...
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Line 11, column 175, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...y are on road. Once they are occupies & loose their concentration, mishap happens. Wr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15733333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84527736609 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7466221905 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.6896551724 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9310344828 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41379310345 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18336136258 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048577647257 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561657677155 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776388145082 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576284163946 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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