Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? give reasons and relevant examples.

Essay topics

Computer is so pervasive nowadays that almost everyone has effortless access to internet via computer. Some children even use computer everyday to surf on internet. Regarding the influence on child who plays computer every day, there are more negative than positive effects. Using computer every day impact mentle and physical health of children.

To start with, the content of internet sometimes affects children's view to world. Violent scence from movie is inappropriate to child, which induces youngsters to conceive the real world in replete with violence as in film. Youngsters are so innocent that they are easily influenced by content in internet. Althouth internet provides voluminous information to audience, these unsuitable and mislead content conteminate the mide of young people. Therefore, surfing on internet generates more negative than positive influence on children.

Further more, using computer every day will cause myopia among children. Constantly looking at computer screen causes fatigue in eyes. Children are susubtable to the consequence of the fatigue in eyes, which is myopia. A statistics reveals that the prodiminant reason for child to develop near-sighted eyes is speading too much time watching on computer screen. Playing computer is a normal way for entertaining among children; however, parent should be wary about its adverse impact on eye sight. Thus, spending all day playing computer has more adverse than benefitial influence on children.

In conclusion, using computer every day alters the perseive of the world and develops myopia among children. Children gain more negative than positive influence form using computer every day. Therefore, parents had better control the time that their children spend on computer.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...mputer. Some children even use computer everyday to surf on internet. Regarding the infl...
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Line 6, column 488, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...uld be wary about its adverse impact on eye sight. Thus, spending all day playing compute...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67669172932 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67384955129 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1092197897 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26157821786 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993575415373 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829074231765 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17981924814 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554029353406 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.07 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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