Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
Penal systems are essential to serve justice to the victims and to avert the future incidences of crime in the society. There is a much debate though about whether capital punishment should be made a must for public safety. In my opinion, while social security is an immediate concern for the government, death sentences have no place in our civilised society. Instead governments should address the underlying cause of crime by adopting more rational approaches and implementing effective measures to act as deterrent.
First and foremost, capital punishment is a flagrant violation of human rights and is principally wrong in terms of human values. Moreover, giving death sentences by execution or lethal injection seems more like a vengeful action which is not only cruel and inhumanly but amounts to yet another killing in name of justice. As for deterring such criminals from reoffending and safeguarding the society, there are alternate ways it can be done. For example, criminals who have been convicted of serious offence such as terrorism or genocide can be kept under strict surveillance and held in special confinements while serving life sentences for their wrong doings. This can ensure safety for citizens without needing to take extreme measures like capital punishments. What is more, in some cases there is a possibility of miscarriage of justice as in many countries people sometimes face trials for trumped-up charges. Facing a death penalty for a crime committed by someone else will be a total disgrace for mankind.
However, some people might be concerned that more and more people will be prompted to indulge in serious criminal activities in absence of the death penalty. This apprehension is justified but doesn't mean we have to take the cruelest recourse. In fact, it is rather effective to go the other way round and start by identifying the motivation of people behind crimes so that people can be dissuaded by suitable interventions. When looked in depth, economic disparity and ethnic discrimination have been often found to be the cause of most horrendous crimes in societies which can go on happening eternally if the root of the problem is not addressed. The increasing rate of hate crimes involving mass shootings in some countries is a typical example of crime perpetrated due to differences in societies. Countries such as France and Germany have adopted inclusive policies which have not only ensured an equitable society but also resulted in harmonious relations between members with greatly decreased incidences of crime.
To sum up, death sentence as a way to curb crime is too harsh and not justified on the grounds of humanity and <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">only life sentences </span>could be contemplated as<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> the </span>maximum<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> punishment for deterring people with criminal motives</span>. In order for the countries to prevent crime and protect their people from it, introducing proper social and economic interventions to bring about equality<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> </span>can be more effective as crime can only thrive when there is disparity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, as for, for example, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2735.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 496.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51411290323 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44769559797 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 176.041082164 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546370967742 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 852.3 506.74238477 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7833211545 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.947368421 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1052631579 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110011411151 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401657520646 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036406541601 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789393327806 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507774478424 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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