Writing task 2 (an essay)
Some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while others think that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views, give your opinion and relevant examples.
In globalization era today, advanced technology has touched all sphere of life and television is not an exception in this and now become considerably more popular for plenty of people. Having said that, others argue that radio is still sublime in providing news to society. In this essay I will discuss both views.
Advocates of television news is better argue that television gives audio visual news which is long lasting and create strong impact on our mind. In fact, people will never feel bored while watching television news because picture are moving in front of us while we listening the news which is not the same in case of radio news. We feel connected with the news during watching news in television. Second most valuable benefit which is worth considering that due to satellite technology the television provides an immediate news without any delay. For eg. We can see live news of road accident happened in another part of country within a second.
Furthermore, an another positive element playing a significant role in television news. It present the news in detail and presenting way. People will get more information as they see in television. For instance, when we watch news about car accident as we can easily observe the damage and route cause and even though we are not there.
However, on other side supporters of radio news argues that older people preferred radio news more because they are using it since too long and become habitual with it and they believe radio is idea for them. Another advantage is that we can use radio anywhere and anytime. For eg. We can listen radio while driving, cooking, traveling etecetara.
To put in nutshell, I pen down saying that it is indeed debatable issue which need further analysis and discussion. However, in the light of above plausible argument along with examples it would be quite safe to conclude that advantages of watching a television are complete out weight its disadvantages in many different aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...levision is not an exception in this and now become considerably more popular for...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'immediate news'.
Suggestion: immediate news
...lite technology the television provides an immediate news without any delay. For eg. We can see l...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a positive' or 'another positive'.
Suggestion: a positive; another positive
...ountry within a second. Furthermore, an another positive element playing a significant role in t...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'presents'?
Suggestion: presents
...significant role in television news. It present the news in detail and presenting way. ...
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Line 9, column 308, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...omplete out weight its disadvantages in many different aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, while, as to, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97897897898 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58513387494 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3268126808 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5294117647 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23349828441 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078077071397 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595990689658 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126329104546 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691492032365 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.