106: you need to travel from your home to place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Teel which method of travel you would choose.

With lot of advancement in technology there is improvement in

transporation facilites. Now-a-days lot of options are available for

transportation, such as public transport as bus,metro and private

transport such personal vehicle and other options such as ola, uber,

share autos and cabs. Among all these available options I will choose

public transport for the following reasons.

Public transport are more economical due to its fair prices for

trasnportation. Public transport are cheaper and more economical for many

people. Now, public transport facilites are developed much better,

additonally, they are insured. If someone dies in accident while using

public transport his family memebers get insurance money for their loss.

For example, when I was studying in college, I used to travel by bus

since, my college was nearly 12 km from my hostel. Initially, I used to

go college by cab since I thought that public transport are not good and

I have to wait for the timings of bus. After using cab for couple days I

realized that I was running out of money and I had no other option rather

than using bus for transportation. Then I started using bus and later on

feel that buses are more comfortable. While travelling by bus I got the

chance to meet new people and talk to them while saving my money.

Public transports are also useful because they help us to monitor our

routine life. Since, there are fixed timings for buses to catch the bus

we need to be on time so doing this will definitely help to manage our

tasks properly. For example, my brother used to work in IT industry.

Since, he owned a bike, he used to go office by riding bike. He didn't

have routine. He wake up at any time and go office late and come back

from office at any time. My mom always had complained about his timings.

One day his bike got damaged and to repair it he kept his bike at the

showroom. While his bike in showroom he had to go office by bus. To catch

the bus he used to wake up early and go early to office and same while

returing he came on time. It happend for nearly week. He used to go

office and come at regular timings and my mom was happy about it since

now my brother used to join us on dinner. Travelling by public transport

really helps us to manage the timings properly.

In sum, I will prefer to use public transport because they have

economical tickets and public transport will help to manage personal

schedule .

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, while, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88965517241 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54966140762 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47816091954 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1799645363 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8076923077 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7307692308 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11538461538 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.53405017921 772% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 56.0 5.5376344086 1011% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872098925049 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297074865851 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233426862897 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0281222803434 0.150856017488 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275268619176 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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