14 october
At the turn of new century, no one can turn a blind eye to enormous direct and indirect effects of jobs on individual’s lives, all over the world. Actually, finding and commencing a great job is an inevitable and crucial juncture in people’s lives. A simple recognition of this argument lends our discussion on the question how people can choose an ideal job that leads them to make headway. Although some people adhere to this belief that people should get a job after his studies as soon as possible, in my vantage point, it is highly beneficial for individuals to spend more much time on studying and make choose a worthwhile job.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes people to choose an ideal job is gaining money. As a matter of fact, purposeful work play such as important role that people’s success heavily based on this crucial juncture. It goes without saying that, nowadays, people work hard to acquire much money and live conveniently. I believe that money indicates the amount of your success, so it is better to study hard, and spend a large percentage of your time to find a highly-paid job. Undoubtedly, when you have a great job, not only can you experience an independent life, but also you can support your family financially. As a result, having a great job with highly-paid is a significant merit of many years of study and work hard.
Furthermore, another subtle point is that a sense of satisfaction can be considered as another advantage of having better employment with hard study. It is noteworthy that, nowadays, people spend most of their time at work, so it is very important that they enjoy when they work. Actually, if they do not enjoy, they will be lose the best of moments of their lives. According to a recent research conducted in my country, prominent psychologist are in the convection that people who are not interested by his work, neither can they keep on their jobs, nor can they reach a pinnacle of their occupation. Actually, the cheer enjoyment that you can gain when you have a great job cannot be compared with other things. As a consequence, having a deep sense of satisfaction is a remarkable benefit of spending much time for studying and finding a better job.
On the whole, according to above-mentioned details and points, it is crystal-clear that with the development human modern’s society, it is a great requirement for people to find an ideal job that they can save money for having a promising future as well as they have a sense of satisfaction. It is high time we stopped overlooking the fact that people should find a job as soon as possible after graduation without evaluate their circumstances.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219696969697 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.143939393939 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106060606061 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0492424242424 0.046263068375 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0700757575758 0.0685040099705 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128787878788 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0340909090909 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90163556607 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0227272727273 0.0309702414327 73% => OK
Particles: 0.00189393939394 0.00188951952338 100% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.0887237588012 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0246212121212 0.0209618222197 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132575757576 0.0139019557991 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2694.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 465.0 408.028673835 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7935483871 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316129032258 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221505376344 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167741935484 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124731182796 0.112833075102 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90163556607 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49247311828 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.2748063397 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.8333333333 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.090687453 48.84282405 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.666666667 120.699889404 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.644075263715 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 47.9838709677 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.45323741007 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134585714332 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.083026661168 0.0752933317313 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.500302495424 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125889680149 0.151897553556 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.409021943587 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0121131846548 0.067059652881 18% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.