1. People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experience, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?
It goes without saying that in such a sophisticated world where the technology growing so fast that it could hardly be believed, universities play an important role in the societies. The inevitable question which has always caused heated debate among academicians is what is the most important reason to attend universities. From my vantage point, the most important reasons are to increase knowledge, to prepare for career, to gain new experiences. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that students have the opportunity to increase their knowledge. As they decide what they want to study, pursue their studies, and interact with their classmate, they learn a lot about themselves. They also have the opportunity to learn about many subjects in their classes directly and indirectly. As an example, when I was attending NY University around five years ago, since I like psychology a lot, I used to go some psychology classes in addition to my major courses. Moreover, since I had to give presentations for many different classes, I learned how to use Internet as a powerful source of information and also learned how to use many different software such as Power point, Matlab and so on.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that university gives you the chance to be well prepared for your future job. Nowadays, the job market is very competitive. Interaction with other people improves your social skills and self-confidence. Sometimes you have the opportunity to work as a team member. In this case, you can realize your abilities to communicate with others, face with failure in some projects and find innovative solution for the problems. In addition, if you are interested in academic jobs, you can try to be a research assistant or teacher assistant. At college, students can learn new skills and increase their opportunities for the future.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance, they are by no means the only reason available. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind that universities are one of the best places to gain new experiences. for many students it is the first time that they are away from home. At college, they can meet new people from many different places. They can see what life is like in a different city. They can learn to live on their own and take care of themselves without having their family always nearby.
To make a long story short, I believe, the main reasons that people attending universities are knowledge improvement, career preparation and new experiences. Taking all the aforementioned into account, it can be concluded that universities play a key role in societies. Therefore, I highly suggest people to attend university.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
..., since I had to give presentations for many different classes, I learned how to use Internet ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun software seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different software', 'a good deal of different software'.
Suggestion: much different software; a good deal of different software
...information and also learned how to use many different software such as Power point, Matlab and so on. ...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...information and also learned how to use many different software such as Power point, Matlab an...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...he best places to gain new experiences. for many students it is the first time that...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... college, they can meet new people from many different places. They can see what life is like ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2392.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07855626327 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92228916815 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52016985138 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 765.0 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8116056396 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.68 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.84 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.12 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270645304693 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737228641652 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064637873014 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160170553439 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060800966846 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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